mr invoice bryson article
26 Medbig Street
Porthmadog
Sussex
England
GT71 29Q
seventeenth September 2005
Mr Bill Shelmerdine
671 Bloomfield Road
Blackpool
Lancashire
FY4 1NZ
Dear Mister Bryson
My name is
Mr Bill Shelmerdine and I am a director with the Blackpool holiday board. We
would initially like to say that I was surprised an shocked at everything you wrote
about Blackpool. I could not believe some of the horrible language you used to
explain Blackpool. Most of00 what you composed and most with the things you
stated were simply predigest and much too judgemental and you only used 1
point of view, yours. You never bothered get out and ask the people that
were visiting each of our home town and you hardly ever even bothered to ask a single person
that occupied Blackpool the actual thought about that. To be honest We would
not say that all of document was awful, you declared Blackpool never failed
to amaze both you and you also stated that Blackpool had more visitors last
year than Greece that was all correct, but then you started to say that
people were applying doorways being a place to urinate, but I actually am a hundred
percent sure that Blackpool town council provide enough open public toilets intended for
everyone. We also thought that this point was exaggerated a bit. I would
like to know how a large number of people you saw urinating in a threshold. The only
individuals who would make use of a doorway like a toilet happen to be people with not any respect pertaining to
others and also have no value for Blackpool either.
Ben Shelmerdine
I used to be not very delighted by the way you changed back to saying that Blackpool
was effective and then adopted that up by telling everyone that Blackpool
has increased its visitor numbers by 7 percent where as anywhere else of
persons taking a traditional seaside vacation has dropped by a 5th.
After that you then start to solid aspirations in Blackpool once again by contacting
it unattractive, dirty and a long way by anywhere, after which you phone the sea in
Blackpool an open toilet, but since you had searched it you will have identified
out that it is now expending has gained awards. You also would have discovered
that it is muggy dark brown colour is because of the algae and darker sand on the sea
foundation. After all this kind of you have the nerve to call our attractions cheap
provincial and dire however they seemed to entice you after all of the good
comments info and how costly amazing eyesight. You explained in your part
that you had been hearing and reading information which naturally means that
not prejudiced individuals have enjoyed then or you would not have irritated to
our home town. The most frustrating element of your piece was to kept
criticising the illuminations, especially the section where you wrote But
in terms of a disappointment it would be hard to exceed Blackpools mild show.
And If you had hardly ever seen electricity in action, it might be pretty
wonderful, but My spouse and i am not really sure of that. as well All this just looked like
tacky and inadequate about rather a great scale, just like Blackpool by itself. I was
incredibly upset with this section. You must have thought that the illuminations
were quite good because you call these people a stage show. I finally got the
impression of what kind of man you are at the final of your content where you
state you had been looked at like some sort of southern pansy when you called for
tartar sauce, I got the impression of any spoilt little child crying and moping because
this individual cant include what this individual wants in a judgemental mans brain. I would like to
ask you a few questions before I surface finish my letter for example if Blackpool
can be as bad whenever you describe this to be why do some of us get more tourists than Greece?
And how come do 6. 5 mil people arrive to Blackpool each year? And one previous
question in the event that our illuminations are so poor why are they popular. I hope I possess
made you believe more obviously about your document and how you described
Blackpool and I can wait over a reply.
Yours Sincerely
Ben Shelmerdine.
